Jessica, thank you so much for your comments on my storybook project about the godesses and their birds. You were right about the capitalization of the word god and I appreciate the small editing comments you left. It really helped me in revising my post this week. I also thought your idea to include the girls in my introduction actually playing with birds was a great one! It really helps to connect the bedtime story aspect with the greek mythology stories to follow.
Jess, I just wanted to take a moment to say thank you for all of your positive feedback! I’m glad you found my storybook interesting and your comments made me feel like I was on the right track with all this! It’s so nice to hear that the things I’m writing are things people are finding enjoyable to read! Anyway, thank you again and I hope the rest of your semester goes smoothly!
Hi Jessica! I was reviewing the comments people have left me and your comments really stood out to me. You seem to always provide more than the minimum amount which shows that you really do care about what I'm writing. Thank you for all of the positive encouragement that you send as well, it's very uplifting. I appreciate the feedback and look forward to you reading more of my stories so I can your great view on things. Thanks again!
I just wanted to say thank you for your feedback about my storybook project last week. I really enjoyed how you talked about the details of my storybook and your reactions to them. That really helped me get an idea of my audience. Thank you for all of your kind words of encouragement as well. Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much for your great feedback on my stories and work in this class the last couple of weeks. Your comments about the ideas for my stories have been really helpful and I appreciate your help! I hope you have a great day!
Hey Jess, I just wanted to thank you for your comments on my blog. Your storybook comment really stood out to me because it was so encouraging and pointed out what you liked about my stories so that I can keep those elements in the future. Thanks so much!
Hi Jess. I just wanted to say thank you for the feedback you gave on my story about Lot. I am glad my story was easy to relate to even for people who do not know his story. I appreciate the encouragement!
Hey Jess, I just wanted to say thanks for the comments you have given me on my story about Brer Rabbit. I am glad that you enjoyed the way I wrote the trickster story. It is always nice to hear positive comments.
Hi Jessica!! I had no idea you were taking this course too!! But thanks for commenting on a few of my storybook posts. Your comments are always so encouraging and uplifting, so I really appreciate and enjoy reading them.
Jessica, thank you so much for your comments on my storybook project about the godesses and their birds. You were right about the capitalization of the word god and I appreciate the small editing comments you left. It really helped me in revising my post this week. I also thought your idea to include the girls in my introduction actually playing with birds was a great one! It really helps to connect the bedtime story aspect with the greek mythology stories to follow.
ReplyDeleteJess, I just wanted to take a moment to say thank you for all of your positive feedback! I’m glad you found my storybook interesting and your comments made me feel like I was on the right track with all this! It’s so nice to hear that the things I’m writing are things people are finding enjoyable to read! Anyway, thank you again and I hope the rest of your semester goes smoothly!
ReplyDeleteHi Jessica! I was reviewing the comments people have left me and your comments really stood out to me. You seem to always provide more than the minimum amount which shows that you really do care about what I'm writing. Thank you for all of the positive encouragement that you send as well, it's very uplifting. I appreciate the feedback and look forward to you reading more of my stories so I can your great view on things. Thanks again!
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ReplyDeleteI just wanted to say thank you for your feedback about my storybook project last week. I really enjoyed how you talked about the details of my storybook and your reactions to them. That really helped me get an idea of my audience. Thank you for all of your kind words of encouragement as well. Keep up the good work!
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ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your great feedback on my stories and work in this class the last couple of weeks. Your comments about the ideas for my stories have been really helpful and I appreciate your help! I hope you have a great day!
Hey Jess, I just wanted to thank you for your comments on my blog. Your storybook comment really stood out to me because it was so encouraging and pointed out what you liked about my stories so that I can keep those elements in the future. Thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteHi Jess. I just wanted to say thank you for the feedback you gave on my story about Lot. I am glad my story was easy to relate to even for people who do not know his story. I appreciate the encouragement!
ReplyDeleteHey Jess, I just wanted to say thanks for the comments you have given me on my story about Brer Rabbit. I am glad that you enjoyed the way I wrote the trickster story. It is always nice to hear positive comments.
ReplyDeleteHi Jessica!! I had no idea you were taking this course too!! But thanks for commenting on a few of my storybook posts. Your comments are always so encouraging and uplifting, so I really appreciate and enjoy reading them.
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