Monday, September 8, 2014

Essay Week 4: Reoccurring Motifs


 One of the obvious reoccurring motifs in Arabian Nights was definitely the story within a story concept. Each grouping of stories had the same theme of the character telling a story and a character within that story telling a different story.  This is a very different approach to storytelling and gives it a complexity that is rarely seen. It allows the reader to stay engaged in what is happening in one story while reading another. This is also very parallel to our lives if you view our lives as stories. Our life is the main story and the experiences we tell others are the stories within a story; when we tell other peoples experiences, that is a story within a story within another story.

The characters that were the man were also reoccurring motifs because they were not exceptional, they both had a family, and they were both innocent. They were both doing something for the jobs or to support their families and their encounter with the genius occurs when they were away from their family and when they were isolated. There was also the presence of the “genius” in both stories. A gigantic and powerful genius would appear out of nowhere in a huge cloud of smoke commanding the man he was going to kill him. The genius is basically evil and is killing an innocent man. Basically they had the same reoccurring plot in addition to the story within a story.

Since Scheherazade was the one who was telling the stories so she would not be killed I felt as thought the stories she was telling to the Sultan was about her and him. When you think about it, she is an innocent person not very high in social standing whom the Sultan is holding captive and planning on killing. She is telling him these stories to, hopefully, out wit him and to keep her alive. So her whole continuous experience with the Sultan is the plot of all of her stories. 

Benjamin Constant - Arabian Nights (Source)

Week 4 Reading Diary: Arabian Nights


Indecisiveness has been the theme for this weeks reading selection. After careful consideration, I have chosen Arabian Nights since it is morbid in its own little way. Since I already know the story of Aladdin and the lamp (thank you Disney), I have decided that I am only going to do half of the readings for this week so I can read about new topics and find new interests. 

One aspect I found rather interesting about Arabian Nights is that it is a series of stories being told within stories being told: it is a story Inception! Scheherazade is telling the Sultan stories because he has decided that he is going to kill her and his interest in her stories are the only things keeping her alive. So Scheherazade tells stories about a person who then tells a lengthy story about one or two more people. It's a story within a story. 

This makes things difficult for this week because I am not sure whether I should do an inception story or just one of the stories individually. I think that a story within a story is very clever and takes a lot of work and creativity to accomplish. I really enjoyed the Scheherazade's stories from when it was her talking to the Sultan to her actual telling of the stories. The complexity was amazing and very interesting. 

This was definitely one of my favorites because it was so good all by itself. I believe this story is all about how people want to lash out towards innocent people after they have been wronged by one really mean person. One idea I really loved after reading other student's Storytellings this past week was how someone took a somewhat complex story and turned it into a story about a child's birthday. I was thinking about making this one into something similar, or possibly making it from the fisherman's wife's perspective. 

The Story of the Merchant and the Genius
I really enjoyed the overall flow of this story, not because it was particularly my favorite but because it originated from one story and branched off into two other stories. The way that Scheherazade used the story to manipulate the Sultan to keep her alive (fulfilling her ultimate goal) was very intelligent.


Sunday, September 7, 2014

Week 3 Famous Last Words


Well this week has come with a lot of experimentation for this class. Different writing styles, different way of doing things, different format, just really different overall. Every time we comment on each other’s blogs I always have some sort of new idea or validation for myself. For example, I was worried all week about my storytelling and whether or not it was too long or choppy, but after reading other peoples stories I realize that I am somewhat in sync with everyone else. I also really enjoyed how some people centered their entire blog post, which is something that I believe I will be doing every now and again.

While I am going to miss my readings from this past week, I am somewhat excited about the readings for the week to come. I have always been incredibly fascinated by Egyptians and how they do things – from the story of Moses to Egyptian burials – so I am curious to see how their stories play out.

However, I now have new goals for the weeks to come. First off, I am going to try and get really far a head this week so incase and incident is to occur that leaves me unable to post for a few days (like this week cough, cough) I will at the very least have a little bit of wiggle room and not be so stressed out. I am starting to realize that there is more time in the day, and week, than I think there is. The only problem is attempting not to be burnt out with everything.

So for now I have decided to work ahead and look ahead. Attempting not to procrastinate is probably one of the hardest things us poor college kids have to deal with, but it is now time to tame that wild beast to jump through the flaming hoop and get it done (without catching on fire of course). 

Lion Tamer (Source)

Essay Week 3: What a Unit One


Week 2 and 3 Unit has been absolutely amazing, I am not sure that I will enjoy another unit more. There might even be a possibility that I found exactly what I am going to do for my Storybook project…but then again I might be getting a head of myself. There were so many good stories throughout this unit. Some were a little confusing at first, but were explained later as the reading continued. What I found to be the most difficult was choosing a story to use in my storytelling. I enjoyed all of the stories so much, and I am hoping that continues into the next unit.

For these two weeks I chose to read from the Bible. Now I might be a little prejudice but, I feel as though everyone grew up learning about aspects of the Bible in one way or another, so I do not believe that extra information would be necessary for these reading topics. Personally, I love reading Biblical stories because they have so much to teach about mankind and the flaws of people. I also really love how they tell you what people are actually thinking and feeling, instead of the “face” that people normal put up to mask themselves.

I do have to say that I am nervous for the units in the weeks to come. I was able to pick topics that I was somewhat familiar with for the first unit, but the same cannot be said of these next few units. I am hoping that I will be able to choose a topic that interests me and engages me in storytelling. It is nerve wrecking going into the next set of stories not knowing if one of them will be a perfect fit so your storytelling meshes well with your voice and the stories. 

Herodias: "I want John the Baptist's head on a silver platter"
Wikipedia Commons

Week 3 Storytelling: The Bachelor



It’s nine o’clock and thousands of televisions across the nation are turning on in the anticipation of another drama filled season. It is the show that has captured everyone’s attention and brings promise and hope of true love. One man…eight women… It’s time for The Bachelor!

The Bachelor
PhotoCo:tvbythenumbers.zap2it.com
As the limo pulls up to the gigantic cobblestoned entrance, all eight ladies are waiting to meet him, ready to fight for the chance to become queen. Standing right outside that glossy black door, rose in hand, is the man they have been waiting to meet: King Ahasuerus. The limo door opens; it’s time for these ladies to meet the man they hope to marry.

 Lady one emerges from the limo and walks over to the king.
“Hello, my name is Isabella,” she says as he hands her a plump red rose.
“It’s nice to meet you Isabella,” he says as she walks over to the beautifully large marble fountain.
One-by-one the ladies meet the charming king and join each other by the fountain. Johanna, Aloisa, Deborah, Adlai. Then the fifth lady gracefully steps out of the limousine, her fairness and beauty capturing the king’s attention. 
“My name is Ether,” she says in a soft, soothing voice.
“It is a pleasure to meet you, Esther,” the king says, unable to remove his eyes from her. The last two contestants, Tabitha and Cassian, receive their roses and join the others by the fountain.

“Welcome!” says the king. “It is so lovely to meet all of you and I am excited to get to know each and every one of you. But first let me tell you a little about myself.”
“Recently I have banished my wife and am now looking for a new queen to rule my kingdom with. Which ever one of you lucky ladies pleases me the most will have the honor of becoming my new queen.”
“You will be staying in my harem for two days. On day one all of you will go on a date with me, whether it is a group date or a one-on-one date. At the end of the day will be elimination and only one of you will continue on to be my queen. The following day all of you will join me at the palace to see the final lady be crowed queen. The first day begins tomorrow. Good Luck!”

Day 1:
The alarms all start going off at 8am, and the women slowly crawl out of their beds and begin their morning routines of eating breakfast, taking showers, hitting the gym, reading, whatever; they are all laying in wait, hoping for king Ahasuerus arrive soon. Suddenly the doorbell rings, it’s 9am and the girls begin to become frantic. “OMG! It’s Ahasuerus!” Tabitha screams, as she and Johanna run to answer the door. Tabitha swings open the door only to find one of the king’s servants standing there.

“I have a message for the ladies from the king!” said the servant. “Today there will be three sets of dates, each of you will be going on a date with the king either in set of threes or in pairs. Deborah, Isabella, and Aloisa – you two will be joining the king on his yacht from 10am until noon. Tabitha, Johanna and Cassian – you two will be joining the kind on a helicopter tour of the kingdom from 1 o’clock until 3 o’clock. Adlai and Esther – you two will be joining the king for a wine tasting at his private vineyard from 4 o’clock to 6pm.  All of you are to meet back here in the foyer at nine o’clock sharp for elimination.” As the servant closed the doors behind him, the women began to frantically get dressed and prepare for their dates.

The Biltmore Estate
By: Ken Thomas
Soon after, a limo arrived for Isabella, Deborah and Aloisa, and they were quickly whisked away. They arrived in front of an incredibly large white yacht with Sea Queen written on the side, and there, on the deck, was king Ahasuerus waiting their arrival. The four sat on the deck around a large round table with a white tablecloth. They drank only the best champagne, ate crab cakes, and had riveting conversations filled with laughter. While Isabella, Deborah and Aloisa were more than satisfied with the company of the king, the king, on the other hand, felt as though there was something missing and longed to find the one woman who would fill him with that spark.

For the second date, Ahasuerus met Johanna, Tabitha and Cassian at a large grassy clearing near his harem where the helicopter was waiting to take them up, up, and away. He greeted them and quickly realized that he would not be satisfied with either Johanna, Tabitha or Cassian, for neither was proper enough to be queen; but he led them onto the chopper and the three had an enjoyable afternoon viewing his magnificent kingdom from the skies above.

As Esther and Adlai arrived at the spectacular vineyard for the final date, the king rode up on his handsome white steed. “Welcome to my sanctuary,” king Ahasuerus said as he looked upon it with pride. He showed them into a dimly lit room filled with candles. A long wooden table was placed in the middle with three bottles of wine and glasses. As they sat around enjoying themselves, the king found himself drawn to Esther. Her beauty and grace was so intoxicating he hardly realized that Adlai was in the room.  He was so entranced that he did not even realize that it was time for him to leave so he could ponder his decision.

The time for elimination was approaching and the women began to become nervous, for the kings decision would determine their future. Suddenly it was nine o’clock and the women were gathered in the foyer waiting on the arrival of the king. The front doors open and a red carpet rolls out. It’s king Ahasuerus in a sleek black tuxedo, solitary rose in his right hand. With a serious expression about him the king walked down the red carpet, stopping right in front of the eight women.

“I had such a wonderful day getting to know each and every one of you, but, unfortunately, there is only one women in this room who was able to give me the spark I longed for.”
The king stepped off the carpet and began walking closer to the women. With each gradual step, the hearts of the women began to beat faster and faster because they knew this was the moment of truth. King Ahasuerus approached his choice, got down on one knee, and presented the red rose to her saying, “Esther, will you do me the honor of becoming my queen?” “Of course I will,” said Esther ecstatically, with seven heart broken women in the background all mourning their failure. And so Esther and the king were wed the next day. Their story? To be continued…



Authors Note.
In Esther 1, the king decides that he wants a new wife and decides to gather up all the young virgins of the land and chooses one to be his wife. Only eight women, including Esther, were advanced and in the advanced stage each women was to spend one night with the king in order to win his affections so that she may become queen. When reading this I immediately thought of the Bachelor because it was a competition between a group of women who all lived in one house and who were all competing for the same man. While I have never seen the Bachelor, I tried my best to make it as condensed and accurate as I possibly could. My goal was to make this as modern and creative as possible, but this story was definitely the most challenging thing I have ever written. I did not want it to drone on, nor did I want to leave out too many details. 

Bibliography. King James Bible (1611): Esther 2

Monday, September 1, 2014

Week 3 Reading Diary: Bible Women

Each of these were stories of Biblical women who were either the loves of or the mothers of great Biblical men. Each of their stories sets wheels in motion for a greater story, and they all somehow seem to be woven together. For this weeks reading diary, I have decided to split up these 20 women's stories between part A and part B and give an overview of each woman.

Part A:
Eve - She was made by God from Adam's rib and was the very first woman. She tempted Adam with the forbidden fruit, which they both ate, and set in motion the hardships for all of mankind. Because they had eaten the forbidden fruit, God banished them and made it painful to have children. The fruit allowed them to see both good and evil. Story of Temptation

Sarah - Abraham's wife. God came and visited them to tell Abraham and Sarah that, while the were old, they would bear a son. When hearing this, Sarah laughed and when God questioned her about it she quickly denied it. God then responded saying, "no, but you did laugh," essentially calling her out on it, because God had been good to them and they knew that all things were possible through Him. Her son is Isaac. Story of Doubt

Hagar - She was an Egyptian servant of Abram, whom Abram's wife, Sarai, gave to him so that she may conceive them a child, for she was barren. Once Hagar conceived a child, Sarai was unpleased by Hagar's contempt for her and delt with her harshly causing Hagar to flee. An angel then appeared to Hagar telling her to return to her master Sarai and to name her son Ishmael.

Rebekah - Abraham sent his servant to get a wife form his sone Isaac in a specific land. Once the servant was there he prayed to God, asking that the woman he was to find would come up to him offering water to he and his camels so that he would know whom to bring back with him for Isaac to wed. That woman was Rebekah; and when the servant told them he was to bring her back with him they wanted to wait 10 days, but Rebekah said she would depart immediately. Isaac and Rebekah were wed and Isaac loved Rebekah with all his heart. Abraham gave all he had to Isaac and God blessed Isaac. Rebekah birthed 2 sons, Esau and Jacob. And these two son's were to one day be two nations, with the older serving the younger. Esau was the favorite of Isaac and Jacob was the favorite of Rebekah. Rebekah helped Jacob trick his father Isaac into giving him the blessing, and birthright, that was to be bestowed upon Esau, and then she helped Jacob escape the wrath of his brother.
Story of Faith

Rachel - Jacob loved Rachel and vowed to her father that he would work for him for 7 years so that he could marry her. But on their wedding night, her father tricked Jacob and instead of Rachel he brought Jacob her older sister Leah to lay with, confirming the marriage. So Jacob had to serve another 7 years before he could marry Rachel. Jacob loved Rachel more than Leah. She bore him his favorite two sons, Joseph and Benjamin.

Leah - First wife of Jacob and was the first to bear him a son. She was tormented within because she knew that no matter how many sons and daughters she gave him, Jacob would never love her as much as he loved her sister Rachel.

Potiphar's wife - Joseph, son of Jacob, was a servant to Potiphar, and Egyptian officer to Pharaoh. Potiphar saw that the Lord was with Joseph and all that Joseph did, so he put all at he had in Joseph's charge. Potiphar's wife then tried to seduce and sleep with Joseph and he would refuse her day after day. One day she grabbed him by his garment and demanded that the lay with her. Joseph fled from her, leaving his garment behind. When she saw that she had his garment she lied and told the men of the house, and later on her husband, that Joseph had slept with her and when she cried out he ran away. Potiphar became enraged and imprisoned Joseph.

Jephthah's daughter - Jephthah was a leader in a great war against the Ammonites. He made a vow to the Lord that if the Lord would deliver the Ammonites to his hand, then whomever would come out of his house to greet him when he returned, he would offer up as a burnt offering. Well Jephthah defeated the Ammonites and when he returned it was his only daughter that greeted him. He wept telling her of his promise to God and she understood, telling him that he must do as he had promised. However, she asked if she could first climb the mountains for 2 months so she could weep for her virginity, which her father granted. When she returned 2 months later, Jephthah did as he had promised and his daughter died a virgin. Story of Faith

Delilah - She was the love of the invincible strong man Samson. Lords of the Philistines knew of this and told Delilah to seduce Samson so they could see where his strength came from and could defeat him, and if she did so they would pay her. So Delilah asked Samson where his strength came from and he told her that if he was bound with 7 fresh bowstrings that hadn't been dried he would be as weak as any man. So while he was sleeping she bound him in the 7 fresh bowstrings that had not been dried and yelled "the Philistines are upon you Samson!"But he snapped the bowstrings, for it was not the secret of his strength. She asked him again and he said if he were bound with new, never been used rope he would be as weak as any man. So while he was sleeping she bound him in the rope and yelled that the Philistines were upon him, but again he snapped through them. So she asked him again, and he said if 7 locks of his hair were woven and fasten tight with the pin he would be as weak as any man. So while he was asleep she wove 7 locks of his hair and again called out, but he broke from that as well. Delilah asked him day after day until she vexed him to death. So Samson told her the truth, that if his head were shaved he would be weak. So while he was sleeping she shaved his head and began to torment him and saw that he was weak and gave him over to the Philistines. Story of Betrayal

Hannah - Barren wife of Elkanah. Every year he would go and sacrifice and worship in the name of the Lord and would give a portion to his wife Peninnah and all her children and a double portion to his wife Hannah because he loved her (even through she would not have children). Because the Lord had closed her womb, Hannah became irritated and she wept and would not eat. After they had eaten and drunk in their place of worship in Shiloh, Hannah was so deeply distressed she decided to pray and weep to the Lord vowing that if He gave her a son she would give Him all the days of his life. The priest, Eli, saw this and thought she was drunk and so he went over and spoke to her only to find out that she was not drunk, nor had she drunk, but was pouring out her soul about her anxiety and vexation. Eli then said that he hoped she had found favor in the eyes of the Lord. Hannah bore a son and named him Samuel.

Sistine Chapel, Michelangelo
Forbidden Fruit


Part B:
The witch of Endor - Saul was fighting against the Philistines and became afraid when he saw their army so he called out to God, but God did not answer. So he sent his servants to find a medium, which they found in Endor. Saul disguised himself and visited her at night. When he asked her to summon the dead spirit of Samuel (for Samuel had recently passed) she responded by telling him how Saul had cut mediums off from that land and asked him why he was laying a trap for her death. Saul responded by reassuring her that no harm would come to her, then she summoned Samuel's spirit. When she did this she knew the man was Saul and screamed, but Saul reassured her again and he spoke to Samuel. Samuel told Saul that the Lord had turned from Saul and given his land to king David and that Saul was to die soon. The woman then urged Saul to eat after he was stricken on the ground with fear, and so she cooked for him.

Bathsheba - David saw a beautiful woman bathing and demanded her, so his servants took her and David slept with her and impregnated her. This woman, Bathsheba, was married to a man named Uriah who was a soldier in David's army. David urged Uriah several times to go home to his wife, but Uriah would not leave his men, so David commanded that Uriah be put at the front of a terrible battle and then have everyone draw back son that Uriah would be, and was, killed. David then married Bathsheba and she bore him a son.

Esther 1 - Esther was a Jew, although she told no one at first, who came to live with her cousin Mordecai after the death of her parents. The king of this land was not pleased with his wife so he commanded that all the young virgins of the land be gathered up and the one that pleased him most would be his new queen. So Esther was forced to go through the long process at the kingdoms palace to find the king a new queen. The king loved Esther more than all the other women and she became queen. Mordecai was a servant at the gates, which he worked everyday, and one day found out that two men were plotting to kill the king. So Mordecai told Esther who told the king and the two men were hung and the situation was recorded.

Esther 2 - The king promoted Haman to his second in command and all the servants at the gate were to bow to him, but Mordecai refused. This angered Haman and so he sought to destroy all of Mordecai's people, the Jews, throughout the kingdom. So Haman tricked the king into signing a decree to kill all of the Jews in the kingdom, and Mordecai informed Esther of Haman's plans. Esther was afraid to talk to the king without being summoned, for the punishment was death, but she kew she had to so she could save her people and she found favor in the king and her life was spared. She decided to ask both the king and Haman to dinner that evening and when they attended she decided to ask them to dinner again for the next evening, for she became afraid to tell the king of Haman's plans. After the first dinner, Haman went to the gates and became annoyed that Mordecai still would not bow down to  him, so he devised a plan and had gallows made up to hang and kill Mordecai.

Esther 3 - At the second dinner with the king and Haman, Esther finally told the king that Haman sought to destroy her people. The king became enraged and left to think. While he was gone, Hana begged the queen for his life and the king returned to find Haman falling on the couch where Esther was sitting. The king demanded Haman be hung immediately and so he was hung on the gallows he had prepared for Mordecai whose words had saved the kings life. The king then gave Mordecai Haman's position and Esther begged the king to revoke the decree. And so it was done and the Jews were saved. Story of Bravery

Susannah - She was a righteous woman married to an honorable man named Joacim, and they lived in a big house where everyone would gather and the house had a garden. Everyday at noon Susannah would walk in the garden and 2 elders would watch her do this everyday and their lust and impure thoughts grew for her, and so they decided hey would watch everyday together until they saw her alone. One day, as she took a bath alone, the 2 elders who had been hiding sprung out and confessed their lust for her and told her that she must sleep with them, and if she refused then they would lie and tell everyone that they saw her with a younger man. Susannah decided she would rather be punished by them than by God, so she refused them and cried out, and the elders cried out against her. The next day, everyone gathered at Joacim's house for a trial to put Susannah to death and the elders told their lie and the people believed them, so Susannah was to be put to death. But she cried out to the Lord and the Lord heard her and spoke through a young man named Daniel who told everyone the elders were lying. Daniel demanded the elders be split up and when Daniel asked them, separately, what tree she had been under, both gave a different answer and their lie was exposed and they were put to death. An innocent life was spared.

Mary and Elizabeth - Elizabeth was married to Zechariah and she was barren and they were both advanced in years. An angel, named Gabriel, appeared to each of them and told them they would have a son. Gabriel was then sent to a virgin named Mary, betrothed to Joseph, to tell her that she was now pregnant with Jesus, the son of God. Mary then went to visit her relative, Elizabeth and when Elizabeth heard Mary's greeting the baby leaped in her womb. Both women had strong faith in the Lord. Elizabeth gave birth to John the Baptist.

Mary and Anna - Mary and Joseph had to travel to Bethlehem for registration and while there she gave birth to Jesus. After a certain amount of time, Jesus was to be presented to the temple and there was a prophetess there, named Anna, who never departed from the temple, night or day. She gave thanks to the Lord upon seeing the baby and spoke to them about redemption.

Herodias -Herodias had a grudge against John the Baptist because he told king Herod that it was not lawful to have and marry his brothers wife (for Herodias had previously been Herod's brothers wife), so Herod had John imprisoned. On Herod's birthday, at his party, Herodias' daughter danced for the king and it pleased him and he told her that she may have anything that she wanted, so she asked her mother and her mother said that she wanted the head of John the Baptist on a silver platter. The king immediately felt sorry for this because he liked John, but his oath to his guests could not be broken so he had John beheaded and gave the girl John's head who then gave it to her mother, Herodias.

Martha and Mary - Jesus entered a village and Martha welcomed him into her house. While Martha was serving, her sister, Mary, was sitting at the Lord's feet listening to his teachings. Martha asked the Lord if he didn't care that her sister left her to serve alone and told Jesus to tell Mary to help her. But Jesus told Martha that she was anxious and troubled with many things but her sister, Mary, had chosen the right decision which would not be taken from her. Mary was the woman who anointed Jesus with ointment and wiped his feet with her hair.  Now Lazarus, Martha and Mary's brother, had grown ill and was dying, so the women sent word to Jesus to tell him and ask for his help. Jesus loved them and so decided that he must go to them. Lazarus died before Jesus arrived and once Jesus got there he spoke to both Martha and Mary, who told him if he had gotten there sooner their brother would still be alive. But Jesus told them that Lazarus will not die and he went out his tomb and said "Lazarus, come out" and the man who had died came out and lived again.


King Ahasuerus and Haman at Esther's Feast
by Rembrandt

Week 2 Famous Last Words


I have found myself struggling with motivation issues this week. Sometimes it seems impossible to keep up with everything going on, and get a head, and sleep, and eat, and have a social life. But it will come. It’s all about telling yourself that you can do it – and possibly having your roommates cook you dinner – and then you will be able to be successful. The goal is to increase my creativity and to expand ideas. There are endless possibilities and ideas when creating a story, you just have to tap in and unlock the secret to your mind. Right now I am still fiddling with the key.
I am not quite sure if I have found my definitive writing style yet, nor am I certain that I ever will. I consider myself to be a writing chameleon, so to speak. But I have found some styles of writing that I find to be a bit more comfortable than others. I’m hoping to become a bit more familiar with different styles, both by reading stories from the UnTextbook and from my peers in this class. 

 Speaking of chameleon's...rather than a picture, I decided to include a cool video of a chameleon changing colors. So here is Super Chameleon. Enjoy! 



I actually found this week to be a bit easier than last week, probably because we are getting a little bit more into the groove of things. I seem to always favor the familiar, which tends to show in my choices of writing topics. There is nothing wrong with the familiar; you can watch a movie or read a book a hundred times and still get something different from it.

Literally anything can be an inspiration to a story – pick-up lines, a friend crying, weather, a music video, football game, a movie, 2+2 – it just depends on how you spin it. Speaking of football, I hope everyone enjoyed the first game of the season. Nothing like game day in Oklahoma to get you fired up. Boomer Sooner.